by HotHunty
This was the flavor of my romp last night. Now I'm ready for round 2! (Both literally and literotically)
I like the setting and the atmosphere but the thing that you did where he says something and she repeates it was tiring. Also the overuse of the word bitch. It mayde the guy look like he had serious issues. Alpha male is one thing and an asshole is another.
Soooo wet loved it... hope that doesn't make me slutty ^^" sometimes I just want my bf to throw me on the bed, hand around my throat, and to fuck me untill I'm shaking
This was fucking amazing. I have been looking for something like this for ages and damn did it make me wet.
It made my pussy dripping wet! I love how she got dominated and fucked hard! Fuck that was too damn hot!!
Hot and intense. So fucking hard right now reading this. Need me some whore pussy to fuck... soon!!!!!
I wish I had a woman like you to live out my darkest fantasies with. Amazing writing, incredibly hot fic and a beautiful desirable author. You're a sex bomb, Hunty!
I've known two women who live like you write .... perhaps to this day. The only thing better than reading your truth is actually hearing it while fucking the shit out of a gloriously responsive cunt. There's just no fuck like it. Thank you for your words.
I wish I could run across you somewhere, so I could fuck you like you really want; a harsh, degrading face and pussy fuck.
looking forward to the next chapters. you write wonderfully and are just as beautiful, too! i've enjoyed imagining myself in your place.
You are the sort of female to which I wish I were married!!!!!!!! Bob
I liked this, a lot. Reminds me of old times had a few girlfriends like this.
This story got me wet in a hurry. It reminded me of some times that I got roughly used. And now that I have my vibe, I'm off to read part two.
This is pornography pure and simple and very well done.
Bring on the next Act !!!!
It's nice to see a woman writing with such vivid images and style. I hope to see more!
This was very well written, with lots of detail and emotion...i felt as if i were there, with You. You have a gift. You must continue. Well Done.
So god damn hot! Dripping wet right now! Just how i need to be used! More!
Oh my good god. Dripping! Usually I'm dissatisfied with the stories because they only have some aspects of what I'm looking for in a story. This one has everything! Next chapter please!
My taste mainly runs to interracial stories (white women, Black Men) but this got me wet too. This is exactly how Black Men that I fuck real-time treat me. So yeah, more.