by exclusivegames
Anytime one of these fantasty stories involves a condom or other birth control, it deserves a '1' or '0'! The story is/was fine, but condoms in a swinging fantasy?
Ignore the above comment. All swingers wear condoms, especially in a foreign country. Keep up the good story and writing!
sorry to say, but you keep the readers out of the story by making it in retrospective and by making it look like it's written in 3rd person..