All Comments on 'Home for the Holidays'

Awesome story, please hurry and write the next chapter xxx

Not every story needs a long build and deeply felt love to go with the hot sex, but every story should have good spelling, punctuation, syntax, etc. Someone else will refer to me as the grammar police but anyone intelligent enough to know good grammar is bothered by such simple, avoidable errors. Proofread your work. Go find the errors and fix them. You can be a better writer.

What happens next, and with this being Christmas do the parents show up and participate in the sex as well?

I thought it was a well thought out story. It works as a stand-alone story, but if you are going to continue it, I suggest it be based around the three of them; developing their relationship and living arrangements. If you start bringing too many people into the story as part of the relationship, it winds up being ridiculous.

Oh my god that was SO GOOD!!!! I must have cum half a dozen times !!!!!! So hot my pussy is still going!!!!!!!!! Gush , gush <3

There should have been a warning that it was one of those "Golden showers" stories.

Bravo! Loved it!

quit reading at the first pissing. Boo!

Yech. Sorry, sick as I may be, drinking piss just isn't my thing. 1/5