by elnovelista
the changing-room theme has been done so many times before. So, although I liked the loving feel of it, I couldn't really get involved in the story. Still nice, though.
'what a good story of a loving couple.' But then I read your story about 'Laney' in the interracial section and I have to wonder about it.
Hubby hit the nail on the head (well, maybe 'drove the nail home!') with his initial VicSec statement about Sweetie's cutest outfit ... her birthday suit!
A trite scenario - well done! Cheap-ass ending ... at least buy some stuff ... call it rent!
4*
I liked it. For me, this could never be done enough times..Each remind me of a real experience in my past. Keep writing.