All Comments on 'Home Yet'

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newjaynenewjayneover 11 years ago
A neat story but...

the changing-room theme has been done so many times before. So, although I liked the loving feel of it, I couldn't really get involved in the story. Still nice, though.

ythebadgerythebadgerover 11 years ago
I liked this and thought

'what a good story of a loving couple.' But then I read your story about 'Laney' in the interracial section and I have to wonder about it.

LickideesplitLickideesplitover 11 years ago
Hubby is right

Hubby hit the nail on the head (well, maybe 'drove the nail home!') with his initial VicSec statement about Sweetie's cutest outfit ... her birthday suit!

A trite scenario - well done! Cheap-ass ending ... at least buy some stuff ... call it rent!

4*

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
Never done enough

I liked it. For me, this could never be done enough times..Each remind me of a real experience in my past. Keep writing.

tazz317tazz317over 11 years ago
SEX AT VICKYS

consensual and with the wife, TK U MLJ LV NV

26thNC26thNCalmost 5 years ago
Good story

I.enjoyed that one. Hot and no cheating.

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