All Comments on 'Hormonal Surges Ch. 05'

great story!! ok this is getting to juicy for the next chapter to be just one page so can u please make the next chapter a little long

hello my dear

i am an editor and i use this site to read. it is very refreshing to read something by inspiring writers. a word of advice to you though. i was reading your story and i know that creating suspense will cause your story to be more in demand but it will also cause readers to discard your story. as i have seen previous readers have told you to expand your story (add more than one page) and i agree with them, because even though i know what you are doing logically, it is becoming frustrating, very frustrating to get engrossed in a story and then when you are looking for details and information the page is finished.

so please expand on your story. let each installment be at least 3 pages. you have talent, and im certain with that creative mind of yours it wont be a problem

Hey, I've been seeing everyone's comments asking to make the chapters longer. Sorry they haven't been longer, I've been typing them on Word and it makes it look like I have more than I really do. I will start to make the chapters longer, but I have already submitted quite a few more chapters which aren't all that long so you're going to have to bear through those before the longer ones come, sorry. From here on I will make longer chapters. Thanks for reading!