All Comments on 'Horny Little Women Ch. 11'

Great way to end a terrific tale. Easy on the sex, heavy on the story- sometimes that just works out best. Thanks for the fun ride!

I got to this story at the last chapter and read backwards excellent.

Loved this one as much as all the others, Mark. Love ya Baby.

It seems everything was against Matt staying in Manila in this chapter. A great ending to an excellent series.

Great work!

Here it is:

$2,000 ring (CHEAP BASTARD!!!!)

slivered down (slithered)

boiling water (INACCURATE BOILING WATER IS AT LEAST 212 DEGREES, A TEMPERATURE THAT WOULD SEVERLY SCALD HUMAN SKIN INSTANTLY!!!!)

bottie (botty)

groan wistfully (IT IS UNLIKELY THAT HE IS SAD BECAUSE HE IS MINUTES AWAY FROM A BLOWJOB!!!!)

dancefloor (dance floor)

self same (selfsame)

boat full (boatful)

imperious cock (MEANINGLESS DESCRIPTION!!!!)

spit ball (spitball)

Turning way (away)

cock throbbing like it had been hit with a sledgehammer (FROM THE SEVERE INTERNAL BLEEDING AND VESSEL DAMAGE, NO DOUBT!!!! ) (HOW SEXY!!!!)

centre, ploughing straight in until it was trapped about down the shaft (SUCH AN ACTION WOULD RESULT IN SERIOUS DAMAGE BOTH TO THE SENSITIVE TISSUE OF HER ANUS AND TO THE VEIN-LADEN PENIS AS WELL!!!!) (MORE BLEEDING AND PAIN- MY IDEA OF EROTIC!!!!)

half way (halfway)

whole charade (THIS REFERENCE MAKES ABSOLUTELY NO SENSE WHATSOEVER!!!!)

earlybird (early bird)

bar hopping (bar-hopping)

The Philippines (the)

keeo in the life (keep him)

ever near to completion (nearer)

give Matthew and I (me)

You started off this story brilliantly with his mother and sisters but you certainly had me worried when he returned to Manila. I said to myself where the fuck is he going with this story only to go the full circle back to his family at the end and what an amazing ending it was. The only thing that really got under my skin was the way you portrayed his friend in Manila with his broken English. He didn't sound like any Filipino I know. It might come as a surprise to some people but I can assure you Filipino people are a highly educate people especially the upper business class their American style of English can easily be understood by any person from any English speaking country..but other than that you certainly deserve 5 stars for this amazing story..

I love the way you closed the story but, wish you would have given it a bit more verbage.

What a fantastic read. All of it. I do wonder what happened to Heather though.

When taking all chapters into account half of the story wasnt even incest, he was in a different country. 2 paragraphs per chaoter about a webcam show doesn't quite count. The kid was an idiot for leaving, as mentioned in the comments in an earlier section, he could have left and had the businesses run by a proxy. He could have been back with his sexy family and taken care of them instead of boring webcam stuff and silly flings with local women. The crap with Rosie was bad as well, practically raping her on her doorstep. Less is more in these stories, keep it in the family, leave outsiders outside. For the first 5 chapters this was great, after that it fell off bad

Thank you

The beginning of this series was great. However the 2nd was not at all good. This included the overall storyline as well as the specific activities with each chapter. The wrap at the end in England was a good summary, but would have benefitted by more substance. A decent story that could have been great if they had just stayed in England.