All Comments on 'Hot Night At The Club'

Wish I was that guy. Your story sure got me off.

You need to know a little more about what goes through a womans mind before you write for one... try interviewing someone you know and trust or find a woman here that will offer you suggestions.

Also, spelling a simple word wrong repeatedly is very distracting; it's Tee Shirt or T-shirt... tea is a beverage