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AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago

Loved it!!! Hope you're planning on following this up with additional chapters, would really like to see how she repays him. Maybe in the future they could take an overnight trip in a larger boat for bigger fish?

fanfarefanfareabout 9 years ago
To visit a celebrity?

Take the wife! Otherwise she will kill you!

And, for all your lustful drooling, the two women will spend the entire visit chattering and giggling about nothing you want to hear!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago
Tempting

Those kind of things only happen in your dreams. But then, dreams come true don't they?

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Like to talk to both men and women about erotic writing. I am always looking for people to help me edit my work and welcome input about spelling, punctuation, syntax and the general readability of my stories. Right now, (June 2013) I am doing research for the stories I write ...