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by charliepenman

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 15 years ago
My

Favorite song, different, I enjoyed it, Thanks.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 15 years ago
Interesting

Interesting narrative device, using the song lyrics. More detail in the sex scenes would have been welcome. I'm not sure I understood what you meant when you said she orgasmed "like an eelfish." Good start, keep writing.

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