All Comments on 'Hotel Window Ch. 01'

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Wilson SpaldingWilson Spaldingover 18 years ago
Obscene! Irresponsible! Fantastic!

Great story! Top notch writing, no bad habits for a reader to stumble over.

The fantasy itself is top whack (so to speak), a little dangerous and a lot of fun. Well done.

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
Will worth reading

Nicely written, very few 'speed bumps for the eyes' (although you used should for shoulder). You earned my 5. Thanks for posting.

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
very hot story so far

I look forward to more of it

LickideesplitLickideesplitabout 11 years ago
Doesn't happen at Motel 6

Nice start!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago

So so hot, loved the teasing!

26thNC26thNCover 2 years ago

Whorewife and voyeur is a cuck story.

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