All Comments on 'House Calls'

by RubenesqueAphrodite

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othbndyothbndyover 11 years ago
Exciting

I like the way you built up the story and described Jess' mental and physical state. I love the way he took the gun off her belt, then guided her hand to his zipper and she finally relented to her desires.

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
More chapters to this story?

Hope you continue this story. Love your writing.

RubenesqueAphroditeRubenesqueAphroditeover 11 years agoAuthor
To Anonymous below

I have been asked a few times to continue this story, and I will work on that. I appreciate the feedback so much. Thank you for reading.

R'sAphrodite

tenbears43tenbears43over 11 years ago
Truely hot story.

Like the story. It shows that women of the BBW ilk, are as needing and lovely as the skinny girls. Keep on trucking.

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
Hot, sweet and intimate

Loved the build-up and the erotic discomfort of both characters. Who hasn't been in that place before? ; ) The oral sex is what pushed me over the edge. Jess sounds like one beautiful woman. Great story!

Dar_JisboDar_Jisboover 11 years ago
Beautifullly written

I loved the slow buildup, the gentle probing by both characters, and the eventual giving in to their mutual desire. Well done!

I'm lucky enough to have my own Jess, an older BBW, and I love everything about her. Nice to see other authors write about the wonders of BBW's.

TheMogul40TheMogul40about 11 years ago
Great story

Loved it. Keep writing.

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