All Comments on 'Housewarming'

by sage_vixen

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CorsetLvrCorsetLvralmost 16 years ago
Very goog

Definitely worth continuing. A worthy first effort. Please continue.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 16 years ago
Welcome to lit

I think you carried the story well but the falling into the hot tub with strangers was a bit too much to believe.

WerewolfatNightWerewolfatNightover 15 years ago
A great 1st Effort!

Good stuff- keep it coming!

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