by gilbd2001
No, not quite. Rather disconcerting your back and forth between past tense and present tense, something that did happen and something that is happening now. I'm still wondering what happened to your boobs - they "were" quite large, so something must have happened? Good story line, could have been much better with just a little editing.
Not a bad story, your basic plot is OK. Would be a LOT better with some corrections in grammar and punctuation.
I can't wait to read the further adventures of this newfound slut. Apart from the spelling & grammatical errors, this was one fucking hot tale. Where to next? She's fucked in public now, so will she make a video? Will she get someone else involved? Will the former prude lose her anal virginity? Keep them coming, and keep me cumming!
a great start. Smart, convincing, and cock hardening nasty. What a fucking dirty slut. Thank you for your story. I have a few inner slut who discovers herself chapters if you are interested in reading or listening to them.... I look forward to more of your sluttiness.
Does the idea of being slutty like that still turn you on, six years after you wrote that? Just curious.