by cirelo
Can't wait to see where this goes. If he develops his "talent" they could have one hell of a interesting party with a few other couples to control.
Good MC, without - or maybe with, that's the key - a descent into utter perdition. And the writing doesn't get in the way of the tale. I look forward to where this is going.
This has promise. Well written and i can't wait for the next chapter. I just hope that he learns how to control his power, wouldn't want him to be completely controlled by her forever.
Haven't read a story like this in a while. Great storyline with much appeal. You also opened this up for lots of future possibilities. 4 stars!
Have been really keen to see a second installment from this exhilarating start