by AbsoluteXTC
Ill Go Ahead and ignore the idiocy of the idea of paint mutation and get to the part that really upsets me. you CLEARLY know almost nothing about tiger anatomy. research. also as someone who cares for captive tigers i was offended at the implication that they are mindless and driven only by urges. eat shit fuck etc. they are extremly playful intelligent creatures that are all individuals with distinct personalitys. the majority of them show love and gentleness to me. they are always glad to see me. also, tiger teeth are not razor sharp. look at any picture of a big cat with its mouth open and you will note that they are quite dull. the canines come to a point as broad as pencils eraser. PLEASE research what you write about in the future. otherwise this was well writen and for the most part somewhat enjoyable to read. this is a good idea. it could be better. please dont take comments as blind insults. they are not.
Altought the story is well constucted, it is pretty boring.
the idea of skin absorbant viruses is kool, but but you need to work on your sex scenes.
Sorry to say but it is the truth
The story story is full of changing and all that
And secondly contruction of mutation part is the worst because it clearly identifyies that you know nothing about big cats
ummm, was that meant to be enjoyable, god, try to RESEARCH how a tiger's body works before writing the story next time.....
dude not to sound like a shit but this storie its boring and makes me feel very sad for all animals that is used that way to prevent species from dieing...its cruel and yeah paint mutation....not your best idea...i hope