All Comments on 'I Can Be A Freak'

Why do writers start stories and not complete them? It's awfully frustrating. I get writers block but most incomplete stories have been years since first chapter was written. J, if you post elsewhere please let us know. Thanks

Yes please do continue

Please do finish omg Nick and Trina yes and maybe even Wade and Melinda!

I really like this story please,please continue!!

Ok seriously I have never commented on a story but this story is just too good. When I realized that there isn't another part I was like one of those characters in the movies who gets down on their knees and screams 'NOOOO!' I couldn't help but smile and laugh while reading this story. I will be waiting for the next part. BTW Great Job!

Lmao! This was indeed a," Gina& Shananay" moment..Mel is more liken to Martin female alter ego Shanaynay. Now with a rap sheet for assault/ battery and kidnapping or at the very lease unlawful imprisonment where does this duo go from here. Nick's (pov) on his night shared with Trin was hot. The scene with Jamal torture albeit abit over the top was funny as hell, this story is oto a roaring start. I can only imagine the writer's block you may be experiencing. I earnestly believe the characters from ,Taken as well as this offering are waiting on you. I Can be a Freak, is funny and I really hope that once life settles for you a bit you will continue.

More please!!!!!!

More. Please finish the story

This was too funny. The description of dude getting tasered was the best. And Trina's night with Nick (from his POV) was hot. -DC

Waiting for the next chapter

I really would like to see where this goes, but it looks as if you're not going any further! Great teaser, though!

-Bizzy

Are u just gonna leave it hanging there?

peeking ducks right i just love all yah stories . . .so with that an a cherry ontop please add more soon

One of these stories should be updated soon. Pretty please.

Despite the technical rough patches; story is alright.

When Nick was remembering his night with Trina, Carlos Santana's song "Black Magic Woman" was playing loudly in my mind...............oh yeah. By all means finish this one. I can feel Nick strumming Trina like Carlos strummed his guitar playing that song. Think I'm going to listen to it now....such a sexy tune.

Hummmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm librarian as a closet freak...........did you not just call me out???

Please continue the tale.

Please update this story soon. : )

I love all of your stories!! This one reminds me of my sister and I lol I'm really excited to see where this one goes so please update it soon and continue with the good work :)

Just found this story and its getting good so I hope you will update it soon thanks!!

hurry up soon.

Okay, we can skip the blah, blah, blah about editing and spelling and get right to the congratulating. Nicely written. the story has a conversational, confessional style which I found enthralling. It was also quite funny. Needless to say (but I'm going to say it anyway), I look forward to more.

Ok so I have liked your other stories,but I got to say I am looking forward to where this one is going. Please hurry with more longer chapters.

I sat here howling my ass off at this story, please please

you have to update this one and soon. I could care less about the errors this is a good read.

i wish i dont love ur works so i wont be addicted with it. . .hufh another waiting - n

Minus the errors (which you already acknowledged) this is great...intrigued by the characters and the backstory

This was a great start. next chapter please

Can't wait to read the rest. Well written, a movie playing in my head

Five.

I know you like most of us are EXTREMELY BUSY! PLEASE finish Taken!! I didn't even bother to read "I Can Be A FREAK" I was so DISAPPOINTED it was not TAKEN when I saw your name. It has been MONTHS now!!!!

Okie I can't wait til Taken is back but, I'm loving this new story.... I'm glad this new story popped in your head...Loving it. 5 stars!

Lmao, yeah, they're like Pam and Gina, but Mel reminds me of a young Medea more than Pam! Or of my bff! Loved it, can't wait for more because I haven't laughed like I did reading this in a while!

I can't wait to see how this story plays out Mel and Trina are a trip...aww I miss Martin now

Waiting in antcipation

Cant wait for you to update!!!