All Comments on 'I Didn't Even Touch Her'

You touched her all right ... in that most sensitive of all erogenous zones; right there in her mind. Wow. This story is awesome. There is nothing like a man who knows how to seduce and caress and arouse a woman with words. Max is quite a man!

mind blowing says it all.

This may well be the hottest story in Lit. WOW just WOW! Hot as hell.

I loved your story immensely. Great characters, wonderful dialogue, and writing that avoids a lot of the usual sexual cliches.

If she thinks "masturbate" is a dirty word, it's surprising that she lets him fuck her the first time they meet. As for the word "vagina," it has no place in a lit-erotica story (unless it takes place in a gynecologist's office)'

Cunt. Cock. These are the only words you need.

Sue.

Los Altos CA

so Freudian, sexy, and noir

(weird--Steven King sounds sort of like--)

You should write more.

dumb but gave me a stiffy to work with

I’ve been edging for days. The dirty talk in the bar almost pushed my over. Had to stop and take a few deep breaths to hold myself back. I’m about to leave for my day with pussy juices running down my legs. I want to cum so bad now and it’s going to be very difficult to put a lid on it until my husband gets home tonight. Poor guy isn’t going to know what hit him when he walks through the door.