by LadySugar
Thank you for a great little story that was so well told .
Most enjoyable.
Please write some more Stories on Literotica.com . I Look forward to reading your next Story, as soon as you have finished putting pen to paper once again.
My thanks to you.
WOW. That was a wonderful story. Amazingly written. I believe I have found a new favorite author. The way the story flowed was amazing. Please, keep writing.
Congratulations on your well written debut story. Excellent plot, character development and hot erotic scenes. Hope to read more from you. I see from other posts that you have other admirers of your work.
You said that there were many of these that you have already written; so please share them with us! This was definitely a Five Star story and I can barely wait for M O R E.
LadySuger, you did a great job witting this story. It was incredible. It flowed at a perfect pace and demonstrated a level of Hotness! I love in a story. Innocence turned guilty yet we so loved them both that we cannot bare to see part or lose the taboo to which they have both surrendered. I was there and enjoyed it immensely. I am going to add you to my Fave List. I will be looking for your next project with guilty anticipation.
WOW!! Perfect pacing, realistic situation, delightfully kinky! I'll hope for more- put them on stage at a swingers' club, for example!!
More please lots more. Oh I think that you think like me, I would just love to meet you and take you to insane levels of pleasure with first my tounge then my good size cock
I loved this story so sensitive and I was touched at how you portrayed their touching dilemma of caring and loving each other through a difficult situation.
Wish there was another chapter to this story, you are a very good writer.
and a wonderful story!! a 5 star entry beautifully written!! you've taken a genuine crisis in David and Cassie's life and made it all work out for the best...for both.
it was a sweet poignant story that had me a little teary eyed on occasion. i will definitely be checking into your other work very soon...excellent job and well done, indeed!
briliant awesome stroy. so very erotic and exciting. love reading one.
brilliant story as well as the writing more of this story would be so good.
This story is so so so sexy! I can't believe no one has commented on this story. I'm new to this site. Fabulous story! Well developed characters! write a sequel please.
Frankly, I am quite in awe that a 20 year-old woman could so accurately evoke the mind of an older man in the throes of arousal. The story felt completely genuine. Well done, Mi’lady.
Well done carefully crafted (but the 'looking at photos' seemed out of place) but I still enjoyed it.
However! It's not done!!!!!!!!! :)
I hope you plan to revisit them!
This is lovely and deep... Please write more... more like this.
Thank you for all your amazing works!
I was wondering how this would turn into an incest story... with different last names, and never having known of each other, they could even get married, if they wanted... this was really, really good.