All Comments on 'I Knew I Was in Trouble'

Oh me; oh, my. What to do. (What too do??) You need an editor and a dictionary. Hint: start with the word "homonym" and then re-read your story.

You're on to something -- the sexual thrill of submission and/or latent homosexuality.....keep it up!

I enjoyed your (hopefully) first chapter. Looking forward to find out what happens next! Don't sweat the english lit nerds cuz it's about turning on the reader not handing in to teacher.

More! I need part two where this guy gets fucked by everyone out there in that "gay fuckfest"!