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Ludvine stood just inside the door, far from Jezebel's reach. Jezebel sat on the bed glaring at her nemesis.
"You pushed him to far this time, I mean really Jezebel trying to starve your own baby to death." she shook her head
"He won't believe you, he knows me better than that."
"He knows you tried to abort the baby, why not try starving it?" she snickered. Jezebel rose to her full height than walked as close as her chain would allow. Ludvine still stepped back even though she knew Jezebel couldn't reach her.
"It won't work." she said calmly watching Ludvine back out of the room,
"You're wrong, you don't know him anymore. He hates you Jezebel, trust me, he WILL believe It." she grinned than slammed the door closed.
"No he won't." she said even though Ludvine was already gone. There was no way in hell he would believe her load of lies! Jake knew her better than anyone, besides Jenna.
Than suddenly she felt a nervous tension begin to clench her muscles. What if by some remote chance Ludvine was right? He had abducted her from the abortion clinic; he was definitely under the impression that she did not want the child. Jezebel was also convinced that Ludvine had exploited her superior sense of manipulation to back up her accusations.
But if it turned out that Jakub Stone actually believed that conniving bitch, there would be HELL to pay!
- COMMENTS
THELOVELY1GLOover 12 years agotime around, and I still love this series, looking for a much Needed update!
Anonymousover 15 years agoif he does sleep with the maid it will truly ruin the story and it would lose its touch . plus jezebel wont 4give him
Anonymousover 15 years agoplease note there is a difference between "than" and "then"...other than that I have absolutely no complaints :)
ebonygriotover 15 years agoMy score reflects my appreciation of your writing skills not my agreement of what is happening in the story. You have captured the torment and toxic childhood experience of Jake very well. You give a realistic portrayal of angst that Jezabel went through in deciding to have an abortion. Where this falls down is Jake using his intelligence / common sense. He hasn't thought to call a doctor to check on a woman in the most vulnerable stages of pregnancy? As previous posters have highlighted, why no surveilance cameras & audio recorders. He is in a business where these would be used. You have done a brilliant job of creating an enthralling yet disturbing tale. There is a dark authenticity in the line that Jake has crossed. His character is wrong but is like a rolling stone caught in the moment of going down hill fast.
Anonymousover 15 years agoWhat is disturbing about this story is that Jake will not listen to reason...yes she shouldn;t have tried to have an abortion but now she will lose the baby anyway. Whay haven't any of the staff over heard the comments that Ludvine has made to Jezebel and I agree with the other post about cameras in the room or something. Thanks looking forward to reading where this story ends hopefully Jake will talk with Jezebel so that she can explain whats going on. ALso what about a doctor to check on her to make sure that she and the baby are doing ok. Thanks
