All Comments on 'I May Be Small'

What a pleasurably unique story you have written. Will there be more? I thoroughly enjoyed this piece, thanks for sharing it!!!

Put it in the bin and don't write any more

Starts off as nc/r, then shifts across into ft as he warms Alice's backside and she warms to the situation. Indeed, I'd suspect the previous night's tagging was a kind of personal dare to herself, in full knowledge of the likely consequences.

First to the "Rubbish" comment. Since you haven't got the guts to say who you are, your comment has no standing.

A cute story that while not perfect was totally enjoyable..

I know it is fiction but you enlivened my morning.

Most enjoyable, and a pox on graffiti twerps.

This should be in non-consent/reluctance. It is, after all, a rape.

Yeah, I'm not too keen on this one. It threw up red, raging flags!

Omg i actually got wet reading this and wish there was more. Im always asked for ID when i go out as people say i look as if im 12 or 13 not 21. I wish i was Alice and taken like that this was a hot story and i liked it. Lucy xo