by Ashson
Omg i actually got wet reading this and wish there was more. Im always asked for ID when i go out as people say i look as if im 12 or 13 not 21. I wish i was Alice and taken like that this was a hot story and i liked it. Lucy xo
This should be in non-consent/reluctance. It is, after all, a rape.
I know it is fiction but you enlivened my morning.
Most enjoyable, and a pox on graffiti twerps.
First to the "Rubbish" comment. Since you haven't got the guts to say who you are, your comment has no standing.
A cute story that while not perfect was totally enjoyable..
Starts off as nc/r, then shifts across into ft as he warms Alice's backside and she warms to the situation. Indeed, I'd suspect the previous night's tagging was a kind of personal dare to herself, in full knowledge of the likely consequences.
What a pleasurably unique story you have written. Will there be more? I thoroughly enjoyed this piece, thanks for sharing it!!!