All Comments on 'I Remember Bethany Ch. 04 (Illustrated)'

I remember your other work too thanks

Effort appreciated! Thanks. Pieater

Like erotic art along with erotic stories. Makes the action more real. Great lets see more.

and extremely boring

If you don't like the writing or the illustration, please tell me why. I put this stuff up here in an attempt to see what works(and doesn't) and to improve both my crafts (I'm looking for paying work too if anybody's interested).

I really liked the way you write and how you drew the pictures. They turned out really great, the only thing for me is that bethany's face looks wrong to me. Her cheeks seem to big for her face. other than that, I think it's great!

I loved the story. Hope to read an ending soon. Let Beth find love with someone she can have.

So that might make her next hook up a little tough.

Great artwork Rondori, these art works enhances the sexual experience while reading your story! You are a great erotic artist!! Please mail me at superloverod@yahoo.in