All Comments on 'I Want To Know What Love Is Ch. 01'

I am sorry the kids came home! :(

Please finish it! With some finality!

Keep trying..........the writing detracts and distracts....from story/narrative/plot.....frustrates and confoundsTHIS reader!!

finish the story, you're off to a good start so please complete the seduction of a brother and his sister.

You story was so replete with errors that I could barely follow it. Not a bad story line, but get an editor before you try this again.

yet another rape story in the wrong catagory and the stupid readers that think this is a good love story need to have thier heads examined this was a rape story it had nothing to do with love it pure force and never should have been posted in this area it belongs in the nonconsensual area

Such a long time to wait!

The theme and plot is rather good; a brother and sister is always a good story line! The editing (?) is sorely inept. Chapter 02? Readers are still waiting!

"I Want To Know What Love Is:" Its been about eighteen (18) years now (September 18, 2022) and Chapter 02 is not yet posted. I'm not pushy nor demanding...however, a little insight as to what we readers should or should not expect for a completion. Of course, this is the second time I've read this "short story" which I've found to be rather well themed and written.