All Comments on 'I Want To Know What Love Is Ch. 01'

"I Want To Know What Love Is:" Its been about eighteen (18) years now (September 18, 2022) and Chapter 02 is not yet posted. I'm not pushy nor demanding...however, a little insight as to what we readers should or should not expect for a completion. Of course, this is the second time I've read this "short story" which I've found to be rather well themed and written.

The theme and plot is rather good; a brother and sister is always a good story line! The editing (?) is sorely inept. Chapter 02? Readers are still waiting!

Such a long time to wait!

yet another rape story in the wrong catagory and the stupid readers that think this is a good love story need to have thier heads examined this was a rape story it had nothing to do with love it pure force and never should have been posted in this area it belongs in the nonconsensual area

You story was so replete with errors that I could barely follow it. Not a bad story line, but get an editor before you try this again.

finish the story, you're off to a good start so please complete the seduction of a brother and his sister.

Keep trying..........the writing detracts and distracts....from story/narrative/plot.....frustrates and confoundsTHIS reader!!

Please finish it! With some finality!

I am sorry the kids came home! :(