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All Comments on 'I Want to Taste You...'

by ViXxXNKisses

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dreampilot79dreampilot79about 18 years ago
nice job

Good luck in the contest

drksideofthemoondrksideofthemoonabout 18 years ago
Good Luck

I came, I read, I voted...as promised.

damppantiesdamppantiesabout 18 years ago
Mmmm

Hot, but could do with a bit more attention to writing. Words in caps are special pet peeve.

Good luck in the contest.

Rumple ForeskinRumple Foreskinabout 18 years ago
Good first entry

It needs some work. But not nearly as much as my first one(s) did. Keep writing.

Rumple

Boxlicker101Boxlicker101about 18 years ago
A fun

story but it needs work and editing.

mikeyluvsitmikeyluvsitabout 17 years ago
Nice

This did it for me you are a very sexy author keep it going

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