by ViXxXNKisses
This did it for me you are a very sexy author keep it going
story but it needs work and editing.
It needs some work. But not nearly as much as my first one(s) did. Keep writing.
Rumple
Hot, but could do with a bit more attention to writing. Words in caps are special pet peeve.
Good luck in the contest.
I came, I read, I voted...as promised.
Good luck in the contest