All Comments on 'I Would Do Anything Ch. 01'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
Oh, yes!

Very nice indeed - you really must keep your promise and bring us more of this delightful tale! Welcome to Lit, thank you for posting your first story - and please have five stars.

asharpintakeasharpintakeover 10 years ago

Loved this. For some reason I thought the narrator was a girl at first. The initial disappointment when he turned out to have a cock gave way to excitement about the genderbending dirty talk. So hot.

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
Get To Work, Girly !

Nice beginning. Don't make your readers wait to long.

Bob_AganoushBob_Aganoushabout 10 years ago
Very good start to this story

It is very well written, and the build-up is well done. You've left the reader at the point of wanting more. I look forward to reading the remaining chapters.

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