All Comments on 'Identity Crisis 01'

loved your story and it got me all excited inside and put a tent in my panties. Would love to hear more and can't wait to hear about the swimsuit he has to put on and go to swim class. Also very interested to see who the roomate is and how she reacts.

It's a good intro, but needed more detail about "Victor/Victoria", such as body size and facial features. This would help to explain how people mistake him as a her, even when dressed as a male.

It will be interesting to see this continued, and how "Victoria" handles "her" swimming lessons, as well as the living arraingments. She will need to learn to control her boi-clit and how to tuck it away out of sight, and will need to deal with her flat chest.

You tantalize the reader's imagination into seeing what will be coming next. Your one-page chapter makes for easy reading.

Gorgeous sweety. I can relate to every delicious little moment. Boys will be girls. :-)

Aren't we lucky.

Kisses

Amanda

Amandaprettyinpink@yahoo.com

Love the build up of the story. It would be better if you write a little longer.