All Comments on 'If I Had Words...'

An extraordinary talent. Great writing and emotional content. "The best"

JuLee

A very hot read. Well done. Thank You. Ronnie W.

Very good. I enjoyed the restrained use of language and the emotional honesty.

I had read this story several months ago as a literotica newbie. After noticing it referred to on a forum thread, I realized that even after such a long time, I had vivid memories of how erotic and sensual the story was. Upon rereading this morning, it had the same mesmerizing power.

You write with an amazing voice! Thanks for your gift to literotica!

I love this story for the eroticism and also for how it transports me to that place. I have been there, but not in a very long time.

The luxury of not having an alarm clock to rouse me and a lover.

I used to love to feel a cock get harder in my lips as my partner woke up.

Fantastic thing, this.

A lovely graphic description of a woman seducing her man even as he is in a deep sleep. Unbelievably erotic and sensual. Terrific Read!

Beautiful description. Sometimes actions are better than words. The slow seduction was a powerful turn on.