All Comments on 'I'll Take Care of You'

I'd like it to have ben a bit longer but only because I enjoyed it so much. It reminded me of one of my boyfriends when I was just starting to have sex. Thanks for that.

The grammar and spelling is so dreadful I couldn't make it past the first few sentences ... !

I enjoyed the thought behind the story, but I would suggest an editor before your next story. It took too much away from the story to try to figure out what you were saying quite often. Thanks for sharing!

And rife with grammatical and spelling errors. With such a short piece, there is no excuse for having so many errors. In future, proof read your work at least 3 times before submitting.

I know most people on this site write for fun, but try to think of your readers when you fail to proofread. If you're going for stars, you're going to get voted down every time with work like this.

At the very least, we'd appreciate words spelled correctly, or for you to stay in past or present tense (not both). Even if you don't understand grammar, the most basic computers have spellcheck, and if you can write a sentence, you can understand the difference between "has" and "had". Throw us a bone here!

If you take the time to write something quality, we will take the time to leave positive notes, and rate your stories accordingly! :S

It is so descriptive and it made me horny from the beginning, great job.😊