All Comments on 'Immortal Sin'

I find it hard to believe that no one has commented on this story. I found it quite erotic and interesting. A couple of minor inconsistancies, however, quite well written. John

Judas Priest - lol - not Rob Halford!

One of the very best stories that I have read in a while!!!!I wish that I could write this skillfully, and as detailed as this.

Love the fast pace story and the remaining innocence in vera

This might be my favorite ever