All Comments on 'In Control'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
Never in control

The protagonist claims that he likes to be in control, but never is.

CaedyCaedyover 11 years ago
It's good..

but it needs a bit more. So much more could be done with it ;)

But I did enjoy it, and gotta love a man who likes to be in control.

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