All Comments on 'In God We Trust'

Beside the nice sexbased plot, the real plot was very good. It's just the second time, I found such good critisism within a "sex story"

there is absolutely nothing passionate in your story. it reads like the weather report, but the weather report is probably more honest.

no sense of tension or characterisation. weak, unbelievable dialogue. people don't talk like that. and too much christian superstition.

just boring. sad.