All Comments on 'In Search of April Ch. 01'

I hope this has a happy ending.

But your lawyer character uses 'then' for 'than'. Which was a turn-off.

Hey guys, I appriciate all the positive feedback in email as well as on this board. I hope those of you who enjoyed this story will continue reading the series. Let me stress I am absolutely looking for constructive criticism as this is my first attempt at writing such a long story.

To whoever didn't like this story, and felt the need to leave low votes for my other two (well-recieved might I add) stories, thanks for your opinion. However, perhaps next time you could leave your name and some feedback. I'd love to read your stories and see how it's done.

Sincerely,

Roze

Starting out nicely hope it keeps up the pace,

J