All Comments on 'In the Beginning was the Word'

It's a great story, well written, and it kept my interest up. But what next? Makes a great beginning for a series. Will they get together? Stay together? Meet only occasionally?

Waiting for the next chapter.

It's a great story, well written, and it kept my interest up. But what next? Makes a great beginning for a series. Will they get together? Stay together? Meet only occasionally?

Waiting for the next chapter.

...has been mentioned in the New Story Review thread in the Author's Hangout.

your writing is first class; the sex is erotic and believable. what more can a reader ask for?

Lusty, but patient and tasteful. You paint Becky very well for the reader - full of vigor, physicality with just the right amount of class and sophistication. Very arousing. I hope your submit another.

And a totally unexpected ending. Good English as well. Congratulations and thanks.