All Comments on 'In The Closet Ch. 02'

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RubyswallowsRubyswallowsover 14 years ago
Laughed so hard I came

I enjoy laughter as well as kinkiness in the bedroom and your story hit all the high notes! I really wish you were still writing and give poor Drew some clothes!

mememe621mememe621over 14 years ago
Excellent! Come back and continue this story!

This is a great story--Belle and her mother have interesting personalities, and you've got some great stuff there in how the narrator is torn between getting into the sex and being forced to cheat on his girl. I think more descriptions of the women in the story, especially at the party, would have made this great story even better. Please keep it going!

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