All Comments on 'Incest Love Affair'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago

Thanks for sharing your experiences with us.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago

Not bad. Although I would advise sticking to the same tense throughout, as you flipped from past to present in a few places. A decent effort and it had me hard so job done! Maybe a bit more back story...

devildog6280devildog6280almost 12 years ago

would like to see what happens next with them

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago
sheesh

"circulating my pussy with his tongue" Like a book at at the library?

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago
if only you had paid attention in High School English class...

the story has potential, but the grammar is abominable!

...and too distracting.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago
good

You got real potential

kathy2b46kathy2b46almost 12 years ago
YES

good so far, i can relate my first sex was with first cousin and we played for several yrs

cheryl_4funcheryl_4funalmost 12 years ago
WOW

yes me alsol my first cousin was my first i guess lots of us take advantage of the situation and being kin

getting to sleep in same room sure helps , we kissed and sucked and jacked for a while before i let him in me i was 13 , i must have swallowed a quart of his cum lol

chennai_rakshasanchennai_rakshasanalmost 12 years ago
Good one!

This story stirred some of my fond memories. My first incest experience was with my skinny cousin but remains still fresh after so many years. Very nicely written. Very arousing indeed. :-)

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago
wonderfully arousing

mmm-gets me so wet. Also gets me thinking about my first time with my uncle. I was 13 and he was babysitting while my parents were away for the weekend. We started playing on Friday and by Sunday morning were full on fucking. We continue till today-he has put me on the pill when I was 14. Every time we are together my mind always goes back to that first time. can't wait for more!!\

XOXO--Heather

Scotchman1958Scotchman1958almost 12 years ago
Mmmm!

Me and my sister used to feel each other up when we were 13 and 14. To this day I wished I had fucked her brains out!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago
proofread

you need to proofread better and think about using one of the free editors offered here it would greatly improve the readability of your stories.

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
IT WOULD HAVE BEEN DECENT IF...

..THERE HAS BEEN DIALOGUE INSTEAD OF JUST BORING NARRATION.

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
Please

spare us any more of this utter crap writing.

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago

Very well written

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
mmmm

Nothing like having your pussy circulated. I'm sure inbreeding might actually improve your family

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
Cousins

While the story of young love is universally captivating and the notion of incest is titillating, I regret to inform you that sexual relations between cousins is not incest, contrary to the notions held by the majority of those who read web sites like this one.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
very poorly written

you must be a non-English speaking grade school dropout. delete all stories and run them through a GOOD EDITOR then repost them. you should be ashamed to have your name on this trash.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
Smae is your middle name dear annony!!

gave it a 5 for effort from this writer.

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