by elizabeth4
Not bad. Although I would advise sticking to the same tense throughout, as you flipped from past to present in a few places. A decent effort and it had me hard so job done! Maybe a bit more back story...
"circulating my pussy with his tongue" Like a book at at the library?
the story has potential, but the grammar is abominable!
...and too distracting.
good so far, i can relate my first sex was with first cousin and we played for several yrs
yes me alsol my first cousin was my first i guess lots of us take advantage of the situation and being kin
getting to sleep in same room sure helps , we kissed and sucked and jacked for a while before i let him in me i was 13 , i must have swallowed a quart of his cum lol
This story stirred some of my fond memories. My first incest experience was with my skinny cousin but remains still fresh after so many years. Very nicely written. Very arousing indeed. :-)
mmm-gets me so wet. Also gets me thinking about my first time with my uncle. I was 13 and he was babysitting while my parents were away for the weekend. We started playing on Friday and by Sunday morning were full on fucking. We continue till today-he has put me on the pill when I was 14. Every time we are together my mind always goes back to that first time. can't wait for more!!\
XOXO--Heather
Me and my sister used to feel each other up when we were 13 and 14. To this day I wished I had fucked her brains out!
you need to proofread better and think about using one of the free editors offered here it would greatly improve the readability of your stories.
..THERE HAS BEEN DIALOGUE INSTEAD OF JUST BORING NARRATION.
Nothing like having your pussy circulated. I'm sure inbreeding might actually improve your family
While the story of young love is universally captivating and the notion of incest is titillating, I regret to inform you that sexual relations between cousins is not incest, contrary to the notions held by the majority of those who read web sites like this one.
you must be a non-English speaking grade school dropout. delete all stories and run them through a GOOD EDITOR then repost them. you should be ashamed to have your name on this trash.
gave it a 5 for effort from this writer.