by tantrik721
She has tasted blood. She won't stop now, her hubby cannot stop her nor can her lover control her. Its interesting to see the transformation of Meena slowly and gradually into a slut and her hubby a cuck.
Loved it so far.
Humiliation is not my cup of tea but the moments she was with Ravi at the end of the chapter made the whole plot make sense! There u depicted so much with so few words. U gave a human dimension to the relationship between Meena & Ravi. Well done!
5* (A+)
This part of the story is not that much erotic compare to the previous part's of the story. I think that next part of the story would be more erotic
Very nice story , aal parts are awesome , eagerly waiting for next udate
From an innocent wife who got blackmailed into depravity, you have now made her A common whore. There is nothing new that she can achieve that she hasn't already submitted to. It's one thing to submit & another to crave. The first 3 parts kept Meena real, unfortunately not any more.
I don't agree with you annon, that is the transformation in Meena which the writer is trying to depict. She has transformed from a shy wife to someone who demands things / sex. maybe you didn't like that she can be independent and choose what she wants.
Chapter 4 deserves 5* (4.75 at least) which is an A.
I strongly disagree with the anon who said the wife stopped being real in Ch. 4.
In previous chaprers we witnessed her transformation and SELF DISCOVERY. She was not aware what kind of sex makes her happy. Discovery is still in progress.
In Ch 4 (in the last scene) she feels love for her husband & he feels love for her. He accepted her the way she is (wild, hot, kinky... a loving wife nevertheless). For the first time she does not find him repulsive, she no longer is mad at him & his hugs and caressing comfort her.
Meena and Ravi had first to dicover their other sides & become fully aware of them, & then - only then - could they come to terms who they really are and what makes them tick & what makes them a loving couple.
i think the author did an excellent job.
I thought there was more to Meena, but looks like it is the end of the road for her. Too bad.
I read all 4 chapters of Indian Wife and Boss series & CAN TELL YOU THEY ARE EROTIC INDEED!
I totally recommend them to other readers.
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Mina's & Ravi's souls share pieces of the same puzzle. When all pieces come into place, we will see one harmonious picture with no missing pieces. Meena & Ravi are compatible in more ways than one. The main thing is he accepts her wild side but worries about her health & safety.
This chapter is a love story wrapped in porn story wrapped in love story...
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This Chapter made me think.
I am a voyeur husband: i get ecstatic when men are hitting on my wife; when my wife sits on my good buddy's lap; when a men dances with my wife to a slow song pressing his hard on against her... She is a flirt & a tease & has a jovial & outgoing personality.
I wonder how far she would be ready to go given the oportunity... plus, at what point i would say too much is too much... Would i ever gind out? Would i be able to take her back with all my heart?
If people find out what has happened, would i be ready to face people from my expat community? Would they shun us?
Love everything you have written so far. The situations are not uncommon and I have been in several myself. As a husband you want your wife to feel pleasure in the beginning but as time passes you feel bits of anger and almost wish for a bad man to make her pay for what she is doing. Then she finds one that does and you feel sick when you find out what she does when he forces her to. How he is addicting her to abuse and submitting to being treated like a slave. He can't believe is luck as he looks at a beautiful wife who likes being assaulted by cruel men and women.
That was my second wife.
It is a hot story author please continue this furthur
Why dont u start a story like meena fucked with boss along with security or story from her hubby side
SPOILER ALERT!
An excerpt from the story:
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"You know how much worried I was, sitting alone wondering about your safety," he caressed her buttocks.
"Don't worry baby, next time you come with me," she replied stroking the cock with determination. She felt him trembling and then he blew his load all over her thighs.
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EPIC!!!
Love the story, hoping it doesn't end here. Please do continue with this story and the Kavitha story.
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I've read other stories and liked almost all but this one I hated the most due to the disrespect and humiliation of the husband. The bitch of a wife should be kicked out to the curb and should be burnt.
I am copy pasting a comment which is not mine.
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Anonymous, over 8 years ago
5*
I have read all 4 chapters and got hooked on the series.
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[☆☆☆☆☆ (5.0)]!
Ravi never gave up on Meena,and she always csme back to Ravi.
Meena is a keeper. End of story. Full stop.