All Comments on 'Inherit My Heart Ch. 04'

Truly awesome! He actually talked to her; he told her what he had been thinking. (Communication; wow!, what a concept!!)

Loved this chapter!

-- KK in Texas

loved it.

And what a way to say he is sorry!! Great update, thank you.

Cheers for another great part of the story! Love it!

that he would have been fucking --- err shagging --- her like a whore, had she shown him how wide her genital hole was, how experienced she was? <p>

but instead, she told him she was a virgin, so it got him all confused?, angry?, unsure? lol <p>

i mean, author, really,,, why stupid "romance" stories always march down this gibberish nonsense road?

that. Elizabeth tells Chase earlier on about her notions on love and romance. When he finds out she's a virgin, he realizes just how serious she is and doesn't want to take her virginity in a drunken haze. He knows it is something to be cherished. This was all clearly written.

And as far as the silly romance goes or whatever you said anonymous reader, Romance is over the top. The definition of romance was follows is taken fromm Merrim Webster:

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1 a (1): a medieval tale based on legend, chivalric love and adventure, or the supernatural (2): a prose narrative treating imaginary characters involved in events remote in time or place and usually heroic, adventurous, or mysterious (3): a love story especially in the form of a novel b: a class of such literature

2: something (as an extravagant story or account) that lacks basis in fact

3: an emotional attraction or aura belonging to an especially heroic era, adventure, or activity

4: love affair

5capitalized : the Romance languages

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So, if you don't want to read a story filled with the above, move on!

i love this story, and i completely agree and personally have been in a situation where a guy realised i was a virgin and knowing i was a romantic backed off, it is not unrealistic at all, its a sign or respect. I think this story is going really well, would love to see where it goes.

What a hot story! I love when anger turns into passion!!

I really like your style of writing, thank you for sharing it.

Such a great chapter! The anger and the passion what a great mix! Love it! Cant wait for the next chapter! Thanks

Another great chapter. I love the stories with fighting and lovemaking together. Such a hot sexy combination.

Don't listen to the crazies - this is a hot story.

HOly crap! He's such a jerk! Why would he use sex like that? that's just cruel! I mean, what ELSE is she going to do but say 'yes' when she's about to cum but you won't let her. that's just torture right there.

i liked it up until this. lol but you write well so i forgive you :P

Please keep in mind that its bunch of ,"ADULTS" who are reading this. Not kids in dineyland! This is so out of touch with reality that takes ALL the fun out of it.

this is an amaazing story and you have a gift for writing

Please ignore the "Disneyland" comment. Appearantly some people didn't see that this was in the "Romance" section not BDSM.

You are a talented writer.