Inherit My Heart Ch. 04

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As Elizabeth's breathing slowed and she came down from her euphoric high, she gradually relaxed her legs and Chase was able to move up the bed and lie next to her. She was covered in a sheen of sweat as she quietly laid there, her eyes still closed. He pressed a kiss to her temple and draped his arm over her waist. Elizabeth tilted her head into his chest, and sighed, her limbs all feeling like dead weight from the combination of ecstasy and exhaustion. "Did you mean what you said earlier?" she quietly asked.

"Yes, you have to marry me."

"No, not that," she replied, slowly opening her eyes so they met his, "Did you mean what you said earlier about why you left the other night?"

Chase removed his hand from her waist and cupped her cheek, "Every word. I know I handled it wrong. I know I shouldn't have just up and left, but I wanted you so bad, that I didn't know if I could stay there and not be with you. And, I didn't want you to wake up in the morning and regret or not remember anything because you were drunk. When I make love to you, I want you to be completely lucid and wanting me because you want me, not because you're drunk and horny. There'll be plenty of times down the road for drunk and horny," he said smiling. "Plus, you've waited this long to be with someone, to give yourself to one special person, that person should be your husband."

Chase's eyes always expressed his moods, whether it be through the mischievous looks he gave her when he was busting her balls or his intelligence that shone through if they were having a serious conversation. All she saw in them at that moment was sincerity. She closed her heavy lids as she snuggled closer to him and simply said, "Okay," before fatigue took over and she dozed off.

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 13 years ago
Awesome Story

Please ignore the "Disneyland" comment. Appearantly some people didn't see that this was in the "Romance" section not BDSM.

You are a talented writer.

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
:)

this is an amaazing story and you have a gift for writing

AlexandergarahamAlexandergarahamover 13 years ago

Please keep in mind that its bunch of ,"ADULTS" who are reading this. Not kids in dineyland! This is so out of touch with reality that takes ALL the fun out of it.

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago

HOly crap! He's such a jerk! Why would he use sex like that? that's just cruel! I mean, what ELSE is she going to do but say 'yes' when she's about to cum but you won't let her. that's just torture right there.

i liked it up until this. lol but you write well so i forgive you :P

PrincessErinPrincessErinabout 16 years ago
Mmm..

Don't listen to the crazies - this is a hot story.

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
Mmmm..

Another great chapter. I love the stories with fighting and lovemaking together. Such a hot sexy combination.

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
Love it!

Such a great chapter! The anger and the passion what a great mix! Love it! Cant wait for the next chapter! Thanks

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
Love it!

What a hot story! I love when anger turns into passion!!

I really like your style of writing, thank you for sharing it.

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
i agree

i love this story, and i completely agree and personally have been in a situation where a guy realised i was a virgin and knowing i was a romantic backed off, it is not unrealistic at all, its a sign or respect. I think this story is going really well, would love to see where it goes.

t0nst3rst0nst3rsover 16 years agoAuthor
Obviously you didn't read the story if you think

that. Elizabeth tells Chase earlier on about her notions on love and romance. When he finds out she's a virgin, he realizes just how serious she is and doesn't want to take her virginity in a drunken haze. He knows it is something to be cherished. This was all clearly written.

And as far as the silly romance goes or whatever you said anonymous reader, Romance is over the top. The definition of romance was follows is taken fromm Merrim Webster:

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1 a (1): a medieval tale based on legend, chivalric love and adventure, or the supernatural (2): a prose narrative treating imaginary characters involved in events remote in time or place and usually heroic, adventurous, or mysterious (3): a love story especially in the form of a novel b: a class of such literature

2: something (as an extravagant story or account) that lacks basis in fact

3: an emotional attraction or aura belonging to an especially heroic era, adventure, or activity

4: love affair

5capitalized : the Romance languages

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So, if you don't want to read a story filled with the above, move on!

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