All Comments on 'Initiation Ch. 04'

the very first paragraph of the first chapter strongly suggested the initiation of a 20 year old college girl, so I've been reading - and waiting for that story to develop. instead, what we are given is a story of the initiation of mike, apparently told in retrospect, since it had to have happened at least two decades before the girl turns 20, as stated in that first paragraph.

when will you complete the 'flashback' and get on with the girl's initiation??????