All Comments on 'Innocence Lost Ch. 01'

As my title says I just loved this story, the banter between the two main characters so far is different he certainly has the rats with her and I'm looking forward to learning why he is like that and so hostile to her, the story really kept my attention and is well written.

Next chapter please!

does he have amber eyes, or lavender? You need to edit a bit better, hmm?

Keep it going pleassee, Thanks sqhead