by sweet_rose210
Your story was chosen for highlighting in the Story Feedback section, under the ANDTHEEND thread, post #282.
I gave your story a 5 vote for your effort.
- - - -such as the anonymous 'effort' shown before this, is that this segment of readers'comments is intended to be constructive, and nasty little shits like him/her should definitely be edited out before appearing in print - mainly because they are demonstrating their ignorance, and who wants to read what is vomited out of the sawdust in the head of such an ignoramus?? Your story was not to my taste, and it contains quite a lot of English errors, but I am grateful to you for making the effort to entertain us less creative peasants. Thanks.
Freddy