All Comments on 'Innocent Waitress? Ch. 01'

Maybe Mark could drum up some more business by making Emma & Sasha dress even more sexy, then entertaining "select" clients?

If the basic premise of the story was more credible I would have scored it higher. The end was worse. So what if he has her on dvd having sex. Embarrasing but not illegal, why would she go back? It would only have made sense if he had a real hold over her. Well written story. Thanks. -- UK CYNIC.

The only thing this story screams is rape; it's disgusting.