by USwatchdog
Often tales of celebrities amount to little more than, "Hey, guess who I nailed?!," relying on the writer's own excitement to somehow come through the page. Yours offered an excellent lead-in and built the tension slowly until a truly satisfying climax. Well done!
I've been hearing about these stories, and I must say they live up to their reputation. Nice work!
I liked this a lot. I liked your first better though, only with Hillary. ;) Thanks for writing!