All Comments on 'Interlude Ch. 05'

I don't usually say anything. But I hope that you are going to write another chapter or two. Really is a good story. Thank you.

Melina has to be the hottest wife on the planet! Hope some big cocked stud (Todd?) breeds her!

Melina told her husband Don (when he complained about her using condoms on him every time they had sexual intercourse) that she was also making Todd wear condoms too when he (Todd) and she had sex. Not so. There are many previous accounts in the story so far where in Todds encounters with her he wore no 'protection'. Is this part of Melinas devious nature or is it an oversight on the authors part?

The characters in this story don't work. They all act like 15 year old boys. Always horny and willing to fuck anything that moves. It's ridiculous.

Well maybe one of the issues will be resolved soon.