All Comments on 'Interlude with a Sub Couple'

I enjoyed reading this story, it was well written with a decent amount of detail. Thought there might be a bit more humiliation involved but overall it was satisfying to read :)

...though a bit more humiliation for the cuckold would have enhanced the eroticism.

I hope to see more from this author.

The premise was good enough, but I thought the dialog needed work.

Good set up but fails when they meet. An editor would help.