All Comments on 'Into the Fire'

as always. Another well written and sexy story . This one is amazing, character driven, and the sex scenes between two women is awesome. I could not stop reading, that final scene in the changing room wow, .

In fact the secretion is in large part produced by the kidneys (certainly not from that tiny gland!), but as long as the women pees before sex, the secretion is very dilute urine, and when mixed with the glandular secretions, I can attest that it tastes quite nice. Scientificly its poses an intersting ? as to what it is for, but we don't have to worry about that.

awesome job portraying the characters

This is a well written and very sensual story. However, there is one problem: these women need to be together, and soon! I hope you're working on a sequel, and don't leave this story line hanging. Good luck and happy writing.

Bemusing

leaving the reader hanging is disrespectful and a lazy way out of producing a good ending. If I want real life and lousy or non-existent endings I can read the paper.

I loved reading your story - and i sure dont mind the semi open ending.

to the opposite...

I have no doubt that they will end up being together - and yes there will be most likely some difficulties that they will have to overcome, but i don't think that there is the need for us to be there and read about it, when all you need to know is... they found eachother.

Thank you for sharing your talent with us.

I will willing walk Into the Fire, if it's as wonderful as this. Eroticism at its best.

and you tell it well. You convey Steph's growing awareness of her life being less satisfying than it used to, and with that knowledge she begins to hope for relief, perhaps escape or evolution.

I'm looking forward to reading your second chapter of this story.

I hesitate to offer guidance to authors because they give us so much. Still, when Steph opened her thighs wider to give "unfettered egress" I think you meant "unfettered access". Egress means exit. And I was bemused at your use of "bemused." Of course, the context of your storytelling made your meaning easy to figure out.

Thanks for sharing this story with us.