All Comments on 'Into the Vampire's Lair Ch. 03'

the story keeps on getting better and better i can not wait for the next chapter i really am enjoying this story

I love this story. I hope you post more often as i check daily for your updates. Thanks for sharing your talent with us.

good story cannot wait to see what happens next

MORE!MORE!MORE!

Thanks

is the cause of all the shit that happened in this chapter. And that jealousy all comes from Alaron. If he weren't so jealous of Draven, things would be a lot more boring for the reader. Actually he is much better since being bitten by the wolf and turning into a kinder person. Now if he could just get over his jealousy, how old is he exactly? And how old does a vampire need to be before hes old enough to be over the petty jealousy that young boys seem to have? As for Draven, what is the deal w/the "Damage Reversal" unit he was once a part of? Is that why he's so comfortable being a loner? And don't get me started on all the things going on with Fiona. Poor Eian is going to have his hands full. I'm really glad the next chapter is in the pipeline, hows the one after that coming along? hehe he

Thanks for the continued great story!

alaron really is something, you can see sparks of maturity there, why don't he use them more often? now he's caused so much trouble letting jealousy get the better of him.

poor draven and poor fiona and erika.

on to the next!

So this a great story so far BUT one minor thing that needs to be addressed: eian gives the two homeless men dollars buut you're in the UK so it should be pounds!!

But that's it. Otherwise loovvee it!

Dreamx

Typical american writer : why would they use dollars when they live in the UK ? It`s either pounds or euros here not dollars.